2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch: Honestly, I didn't receive any feedback on my second elevator pitch, but I noticed personally that I didn't do a great job of providing a fluent speech of presenting my opportunity. This includes some stuttering and not good eye contact. I tried to eliminate non-verbal distractions, but to me it's somewhat of a habit to explain words with hand movements. I think if I did receive any feedback from classmates, they would most likely cover these little hiccups in my second attempt.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback: I wanted to focus more on providing my message on a much clearer basis and get straight to the point of what my business opportunity is about. I also tried to keep a good amount of energy and get the audience hooked right away. Eye contact was also a big key for me on this last try. Also not using so much hand movement and non-verbal distractions, I think made my last attempt go a lot better.
Hey Stuart,
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job of keeping eye contact, good posture and ultimately an enthusiastic tone of voice when conveying what opportunity your business helps solve. I also believe you did a good job of improving on any little pronunciation, distractions or stuttering mistakes on your third attempt of your elevator pitch. I like how you immediately grabbed the viewers’ attention and offered a new improvement to help better the movie-goer industry. I believe your differentiator offers you a significant advantage within your opportunity, as expenses seem to be the main drawback of why movie theaters are less popular nowadays. Great Job!