1) The pitch: https://youtu.be/yVU-ATgCOm8
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch & 3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Some of the feedback from my last elevator pitch helped me in some ways and there were some things I tended to stick with in my second attempt in this assignment. Some suggestions that surprised me and I didn't even realize were the amount of hand gestures I displayed in my first elevator pitch. So I kept it in my mind to prepare to not use my hand movements as much while explaining my pitch, so for the entire video I kept my hands in the pockets of my coat to contain myself and not make it so distracting for viewers. I don't think I did a good job of delivering the message as clear as I wanted to, but my main goal was to not be so much distractive, for example with my hand gestures. Hopefully I can master the tone and smoothness of my speech to deliver a professional elevator pitch for the third attempt of this assignment.
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